Sunday, January 08, 2006

Trip Bus

I sit in the back.

The bus is warmer there
and
besides;

It's more interesting.

They feel more free
to listen, act, laugh
with candor.

Colorful types
makeabeeline
for it.

In the back of the bus
you hear strange;

"Fuck you, Mr. Boris!"

Excuse me?

Oh, i think the man said,

"Back door, please!"

when the rear bus door did not open
fast enough.

Another time,
when I was with my wife,

in the back of the bus

a man made
masturbating motions

while
staring
at
my
wife
-------->(and me).

I could do without
that.

4 Comments:

Blogger Noralil Fores said...

I really love the use of dialogue. Can you give more examples of the strangeness of the back of the bus? The guy who steps in pink bubble gum and picks it off his boots with dirty fingers. Things like that. More specifics would strengthen the last image of the masturbating motion man.

January 08, 2006  
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