Monday, January 09, 2006

Picturography: Stew

(---Lately-I-Have-Been----)
(-----------STEWING---------)
(----------in-my-own--------)
(------------JUICES-----------)
(~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~)
|====================|
--^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^--
--^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ --
^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^

9 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Just what the hell is that supposed to be?

Is "stewing in your own juices" a metaphor for whacking off? There's a lot of that going on here, you know.

January 09, 2006  
Blogger Noralil Fores said...

That's interesting. It reminds me of a modern poet. Oh, man, which one-I'll get back to you on that as soon as I look up his name. In terms of the writing, it might be interesting to see if you can do a power switch by playing with the line, such as "You are stewing in my own juices." Well, I guess that does impart a sexual context just like No Name said. But, it might be interesting to play with power here and thereby create a new piece.

January 09, 2006  
Blogger In verse said...

Replacing JuIcEs with BLOod would make the piece really steaming and angry.

Specially in these times of organized state violence.

I like graphical(pun intended) poems, nice work!

January 09, 2006  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

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January 10, 2006  
Blogger Shifty McPenis (Deceased) said...

Hee hee!

January 10, 2006  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

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January 10, 2006  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

EuGENE, you're interfering with my expression of EMOTIONAL INTELLIGENCE!

Stop stifling me!

January 10, 2006  
Blogger Eugene's Wife said...

Just stop it, anonymous! Stop tormenting Eugene!

January 11, 2006  
Blogger Tom Michaels said...

You're a lunatic. But, then it takes all kinds to run a world...:).

January 25, 2006  

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